The Dream League Forum
In order to post in and view most of the forum, you will have to login. So please join us ^_^

a place to dream, and show the world how awesome you really are


You are not connected. Please login or register

Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN!

Go to page : 1, 2, 3  Next

View previous topic View next topic Go down  Message [Page 1 of 3]

1--- Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sun Sep 05, 2010 4:16 pm

griffinheart

avatar
Admin
Admin
»Fiction Contest #4«


¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤
Hey there everyone! It's time for another writing contest! What's the mission? Write a birthday themed story involving at least 2 of DLs members! Ooh! There are so many possible things to do to your friends in this contest! (Mwahaha! Twisted Evil ) The deadline for entries will be September 19th, but the deadline might be extended if need be.

Here are the rules for the contest:
Like a Star @ heaven Birthday Themed
Like a Star @ heaven Involves at least 2 Dream League members
Like a Star @ heaven Maximum length: 1500 words
Like a Star @ heaven Minimum length: 350 words


1st Place
- Your entry will be in the Netzine!
- Forum Points! (good for using in the shop, and such)
- Special Forum Accessory
- 1st Place Contest ribbon
-

2nd Place
- Forum Points!
- Special Forum Accessory
- 2nd Place contest ribbon

3rd Place
- Forum Points!
- Special Forum Accessory
- 3nd Place contest ribbon


Contestants:

-Meap & Cheese
Meap & Cheese's Entry:

Rare Candy Clover and the Secret of the Dreams Rare Candy

Clover POV:
The corridor was just ahead. The girl ran, hand in hand with a younger girl. They were running together, but not in a frolicking manner, but more in fear of something... something was chasing them, and by the looks of it, it was getting closer. The older girl turned sharply around a corner, towing the younger girl around the corner. The door was just ahead, when it suddenly vanished, and a face showed up in the darkness. It was laughing, cackling.

Clover shot up in bed. Her forehead was sweating. She panted, but soon calmed down after she realized that what she had just seen was not reality, but a dream. Clover tried her best to forget the dream, but it kept coming back, recurrently. Only the sight of a sign saying 'Dream League Birthday Party: Tonight @ 8:00!'. Attached to the flyer, was a picture of a house that resembled a Hitmonlee's head. That was Kommeo's house.

Showers POV:

The room was empty, aside from a young girl, an older girl, and a security camera. The young girl clung to the older, and was shaking with fear. The person behind the video camera laughed maniacally, similar to Clover's dream.

Showers rolled over in her bed until falling off and thumping to the ground. She awoke, rubbed her head, and spent the majority of the day trying to forget the dream. That's when she remembered the party.

Kommeo POV:

Later that night, Kommeo was bustling around his house, in the housing district, of course. The doorbell rang, just as Kommeo put the final decoration on the wall.

"Thanks for the help MBlaze." Kommeo rolled his eyes and headed for the door.

MBlaze laughed from the living room. He was lying on the couch, watching tv. "Hey, just be glad I didn't make a racist joke out of all this."

Kommeo laughed jokingly and then answered the door. Everyone was there. How they managed to all arrive at the same time, well that was a mystery to him. Everyone filed into the house, and when the door closed, Clover screamed, because the mysterious cackle of her dream rang out through the building. The lights flew out, but Kommeo felt Showers grab his arm, but then realized who she was grabbing hold of and let go.

"Dream League. Your time is over, and you no longer will be the most popular Pokémon forum!" the voice rang out.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" somebody, who's voice was hard to make out, screamed.

The lights returned and a figure clothed in black entered. But suddenly, the black was ripped off, revealing Blaze! "Hahaha! I got all you suckers!" Everyone laughed, but Clover and Showers let out a sigh of relief, though nobody heard it.

The night went on, games were played and the celebration was one that nobody would ever forget.

-Clover
Clover's Entry:

NOTES BEFORE READING: Everyone is half Pokémon half human here. This is basically what I was going to make the first comic about, but I don't have a lot of time to draw it Sad Maybe I will someday.

GIRLS
Clover - Flareon
Griffinheart - Absol
Darknesswolf - Eevee
Old Lady - ???

GUYS
DXRenagade - Lucario
ThisGuy - Marowak
Dark Sceptile - Porygon Z
Meap - Mudkip

[scene]
And old Japanese style Onsen (hot spring) run by a little old Lady. The group is walking in to enjoy the DL Anniversary and their day off. Clover is talking to the old lady who works at the Onsen.

Clover: So the group discount is still going on right?


Old Lady: Oh yes! It's a really great deal.

Clover: Alright. I'll take a Saké then =w=;

DX: No vodka?...Eh...Saké it is.

Griffinheart: Any opportunity to drink huh you guys?


ThisGuy: Can I just get an order of bread? o3o;

[scene]
After buying snacks, the group heads out to the springs. The Onsen is divided up into 2 sections (guys and girls) The hotsprings are surounded by lush trees and bushes that make a lovely natural barrier. There are also large boulders and flat stones to sit on.

Griffinheart: Aah...it's so pretty here! I wish I could live here.

--a loud splash is heard from the guy's section--

Griffinheart: Pff. Men. No respect for nature.

--Clover runs by griffinheart and does a cannon ball into the spring, closely followed by Darknesswolf--

Griffinheart: affraid

[scene]
Onto the guys section....

--DX is staring at ThisGuy--

ThisGuy:......yes?

DX: Oh. Um, well...do you ever take off your helmet?

--DX was referring to the marowak helmet that ThisGuy was always wearing--

ThisGuy: pig Only for your mother...

DX: HEY! Mad

Meap: GUYS, come on! We're here to celebrate the anniversary. Lets just relax.

Dark Sceptile: And on such a momentous occasion...perhaps DX will let me try some of his Saké Very Happy

DX: >_> Nu....

Dark Sceptile: Sad aw.

--suddenly a loud crashing noise and yelling was heard from the girls side of the springs--

Meap: Hm, should one of us go over to check on them?

ThisGuy: And risk getting labeled a total perv? No thanks.

DX: I don't mind! Cool

--DX walks into the entry room where the old lady is sitting--

DX: Um hey, I need to check on my friends. It sounds like they might be in trouble or something?

Old Lady: Ohohohoho I see what you did thar cat I won't tell anyone! hohohoho~

DX: Um...right then. Gunna check on my friends now.


--He walks out to the girls side of the Onsen to see Darknesswolf, Griffinheart, and Clover all battling a giant Tentacruel that seems to have come from the spring.--

DX: OMG WHAT!?

Clover: DX!!!!!

--Clover was wrapped up completely by one of the tentacles, and was being swung around in the air--

Clover: STAB ITS EYE WITH SOMETHING!!!! I THINK IT'S THE WEAK SPOT!!

--Darknesswolf and Griffinheart were nimbly dodging the tentacles. It seemed their attacks had little to no effect on the massive Tentacruel--

DX: Okay! Hold on! confused

--His mind was racing to think of an object he could throw at the sea creatures eye. He ran back into the room with the Old Lady and picked her up--

DX: HYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

--the old lady flew through the air towards the tentacruel's eye. Unfortunately, the massive tentacruel saw this, and slapped her to the boys side of the Onsen where she landed right in the middle of ThisGuy, DarkSceptile, and Meap--

ThisGuy: Suspect Old lady!? What are you doing here?

Old Lady: Massive....tentacruel......oh em gee.........

Dark Sceptile: Come on! We've got to go help them!

--The boys ran over and started attacking the tentacruel with the girls. ThisGuy threw his mighty bone club, Meap was biting the heck out of the tentacles, and DarkSceptile was slappin' it all around like none other, Griffinheart was throwing sky scrapers at it, Darknesswolf was trying to use tail whip but was not doing so hot!! Suddenly, A GIANT ARCEUS APPEARED!!!!!--

::arceus:: Arceus: ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRR~!!!!!!!!!!

--Arceus then epically pwnd the gigantic Tentacruel right in it's face, sending it back into the depths of the spring. Suddenly, it transformed back into the Old Lady!--

Old Lady: FEH! That's what you get for slapping around a little old lady~ hohohohohohoho~♫

Clover: Old Lady! You were Arceus all along? WOW! I don't know what to say except.....do you think we could have our money back? .-.

--end--


-Dark Sceptile
Dark Sceptile's Entry:

As the girl walked down the street, she noticed the flyer laying on the ground. She read it:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DREAM LEAGUE
WE ARE PLANNING A SURPRISE PARTY FOR CLOVER
DON'T TELL HER

As the girl read, she started running to the address printed in the bottom. When she got to the house at that address, she knew she was in the right place. The house was shaped like a Cubone head, so she suspected it was Guy's house. She knocked on the door and waited a couple seconds before anyone answered.

"Hey Showers, we were wondering if you were coming. DX said he called and left a message for you"

"Really? I didn't see it on my phone."

"Oh...well at least you're here."

"Yeah..."

Showers and Guy walked into the house. Then they both heard a screeching noise.

"Oh, sounds like Cladstn and Kommeo are here. I told them to slow down before they turned into my driveway. >_>"

As Guy walked off to the front door, Showers decided to look around. She had never been in Guy's house. When she got to the backyard, she saw something horrible, DXRenegade on a stripper pole... She ran off to the bathroom to throw up.


"Well, I told you to slow down first..."

Guy had walked back into the house with Kommeo and Cladstn.

"We know. Cladstn forgot, though..."

"If you knew, then how did you forget?"

"I don't know"

Kommeo and Guy continued arguing as Cladstn went to the bathroom that Showers had just come out of.

"I wouldn't go in there if I were you, Clad."

"Alright then."

Showers walked off. Cladstn headed toward the backyard, saw DX on a stripper pole, and headed toward the kitchen instead. There he saw a note saying:

'Don't make Cladstn get on the stripper pole. DX volunteered for it.'

Cladstn walked off to the backyard and saw DX was done practicing. He hoped Clover would like it...


"SURPRISE"

Clover almost fell backwards from all the people there.

"Wow, is that DX on a stripper pole?!"

She goes running to the backyard, leaving everyone stunned.


-5P33D5
5P33D5's Entry:

Three figures embraced the cold of the night. They ran to the community hall, a decent sized building located in the centre (I spell differently >_>) of the town square.

They entered the building and started to creep inside when a group of five others sprinted into the doorway pushing the original three over and squashing them.

“You idiots! We are supposed to keep quiet!” sharply whispered the one known as Kommeo.

“Sorry D:” replied the voices of Showers, Blaze, ThisGuy, NeonNick and Cladstn Vampire.

The remaining two were known as DXrenagade and Fuzia – two of the original three.

The group hurried around the hall preparing it for tomorrow’s big party. Streamers were flung around the place, as well as card-board cut outs of different gaming characters – though they weren’t “flung” around as much.
In the early hours of the morning the group tidied up the mess and plugged in all the electrical cords and such.

“We done?” questioned Nick.

“Surprisingly yes, we have the music and the food and the other stuff,” replied Kommeo.

The group sat down together and admired their handiwork.

“Hey Kommeo? What was the ‘random’ thing that 5P33D5 asked you to do?” asked DX.

“Ah that... Well... He asked me to play the Champion Lance Pokemon theme at exactly 12 noon... Don’t ask why.”

“Pretty weird thing for him to say,” piped Fuzia.

“Pretty random.... He normally isn’t this random... I think,” replied Cladstn.

The group then split up, had a nap and got ready for the big party.

The group later returned to the hall which had a banner saying “Dream League First Anniversary” and soon the honoured guest Clover arrived along with many others like DarkSceptile, Meap, Rezna, Paradox and Locodude.

It was at 12 noon when something happened that every member present would remember for the rest of their lives.
Kommeo eyed the time, 11:59 am... Better get ready to play the tune. The second, minute and hour hand struck twelve, Kommeo pressed play and everyone turned and looked at him in shock. At that moment a faint sound was heard, like an item falling from the sky and surprisingly... something did fall from the sky and smash a hole into the roof of the hall. Four figures jumped off a large object. These four were Cindergh, SharlottCraine, Jo Jo and the guy who vaguely warned that something would happen, 5P33D5.

“Hey guys! Very Happy” said 5P33D5, Jo Jo, Sharlott and Cindergh.

Everyone else just stood with a blank expression on their face, except for Cladstn who was playing Pokemon White in a coner.

“5P33D5! Jo Jo! Sharlott! Cindy!” he shouted, “Hey Kommeo, now you can see the face of the guy who beat you in that Over Used tourn-“

“Oh shut up Cladstn!” snapped Kommeo.

“What a lovely surprise,” said Clover and Fuzia simultaneously.

“You haven’t seen anything yet,” replied Jo Jo, “Look what we did together!”

The cloth was taken off the object to reveal..... a cardboard box ==”.

“Uh, a bit bland?” said Meap as 5P33D5 stood back to look at the box.

“Uh, did you really think we were that mean... you do know you can put stuff in the box... >_>” said 5P33D5.

“Oh! xD”

Sure enough, there was something inside the box. Everyone stared at it as though it was from the future. In front of them was 5P33D5, Jo Jo’s, Cindergh’s and Sharlott’s combined present. A giant robotic Jirachi – that could float Very Happy.
The monotone voice of the Jirachi exclaimed “Happy Birthday!” and watched over as the members of the Dream League celebrated their first anniversary.

-the end-


-This guy
This Guy's Entry:
The Entry Without a Title


"Hgh...so...BORED!" A girl plopped her head down on the table she was sitting next to. "....ARRGH!" she suddenly stood up and yelled at the ceiling. "This is suppoesed to be a party, isn't it?! Where the heck is the excitement?!" Just after saying this though, she heard a...rather bizzarre sound.

"aaaaahhhhh...."

Putting her head back up, she looked around the room. "...? What...in the world is that?"

Pausing for a second, the girl looked around for a bit before hearing the sound again, this time louder than before. "Aaaaaaaahhhhhh....."

Yep, that's a weird sound all right. After realizing that it was coming from outside, the girl went on out to her front porch to have a look-see. She immediately regretted it.

"AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! -OWNED!!!! CRASH!!

Busting a hole in the rooftop, the foreign object had landed on the girl's front porch. Unfortunately, it landed on her, too.

Immediately after gaining conciousness again, the girl scrambled to get out from under the object.

"RRrrrggh! Oof! WHAT THE HECK WAS-Oh, it's you Blaze."

The foreign object was Blaze, huh?

"Heh, you don't sound happy to see me, Showers." Blaze smiled as he straightened himself up. (And the girl was Showers! Good, now I can stop referring to her as "the girl".)

"Dang it Blaze! Who the freak WOULD be happy to have someone land on top of them?! Why didn't you just use the door, anyway?"

"Ah, come on. That's no fun! Skydiving's really the way to go to make an entrance. Wink Besides, I brought the DL Preseeeent~!" He hummed.

"YOU REALLY BROUGHT IT?!" Showers squealed as she jumped over to him. (Which is odd because after that, normal people would at LEAST have broken legs.) "Where is it?!"

Blaze took a look at his watch. A special watch that had a marowak ( Awesomesauce! ) keeping time on it. "It should be here any second now."

Shower's face gave him an inquisitive look. "...? What does that-"

CRASH!!

A large present dropped from the sky and landed on our female lead.

"DANG IT BLAZE!"

10 Minutes Later


Showers and Blaze had gone inside and were heading down the hallway and into the backyard.

"Sho howth the parthy peparathon goin'?" Blaze asked through a swollen face. (Shower's didn't appreaciate being used as a landing strip.)

Showers grabbed a bag of ice for Blaze and tossed it to him. "Well, Sharlott is decorating the backyard as we speak, and Clover's setting up the food and drinks. Did you send the invites to Kommeo and Griffin?"

"I sure did!" Blaze gave her a thumbs up. "Although, Komms said that he couldn't get a ride over here, so I...er..."helped" him find one."

"What do you mean by-"

AAAAAAHHHHHH!!

"....Dang it Blaze.... Crying or Very sad "

CRASH!!


30 minutes later

After peeling Kommeo off of Showers, the other guests had arrived. Fuzia, Rezna, DX, AV, ESP, LOL, BRB, BBQ....everyone was there! Not to mention that the backyard was strewn with birthday themed papercrafts made by Sharlott. An army of trolls lying in a pile by the front gate. (They tried to crash the party. Ban hammering ensued.)

"OK Everyone!" Showers clapped her hands together to get everyone's attention. "It's time to unveil the DL Present!"

Showers motioned over to the back door, 5P33D5 and Darknesswolf wheeled out the present into the center of the DL Members.

"Now, time for the unveiling!" She said as she yanked away the paper in one fell swoop. A silence washed over the crowd for a second.

....

"Fu fu fu... Oh, it's wonderful!" Miku laughed evily as she pulled out her personal ban-hammer.

"Yes, it's PERFECT." DX said as he did the same.

"BA HA HA HA HA HA!" Clover laughed as she followed what everyone else was doing. For, on the stand, was none other than Pokecenter tied to a stake, dressed as a Pikachu, with a sign that said "Beat me, I have candy inside!" (He's not dead, I'm not that cruel.)

"All right guys!" Shower's eyes glinted. "LET'S GET STARTED!"

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY DREAM LEAGUE!" Everyone shouted as they jumped in.

The candy was good.

DANG IT BLAZE! D<




Woo! End! I just couldn't resist using Pokecenter as the final joke, as he kinda killed himself off and we haven't heard of him for a while. Anyway, I haven't written anything in a long time, so I hope you enjoyed it! Smile


THE RESULTS
FIRST: ThisGuy
SECOND: Clover
THIRD: 5P33D5



Last edited by griffinheart on Sat Oct 02, 2010 2:20 pm; edited 13 times in total

http://guardeddreams.site40.net

2--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:07 pm

[Meap]Katniss~<3

avatar
Pokémon Legend
Pokémon Legend
Meap may enter...


_________________


http://reione.forumotion.com/

3--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:27 pm

Clover

avatar
Admin
Admin
IM GOING TO ENTER SOMETHING RIDICULOUUUSS!!!!

http://www.sweetcharm.net

4--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:49 pm

Esp

avatar
Forum Mod
Forum Mod
I might enter with a crappy one. >_>

5--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:42 pm

Nellie Lovett

avatar
Team Rocket
Team Rocket
@griffinheart wrote:Maximum length: 1500 words

... >.>

I might enter, but don't count on it:/.


_________________

Hunt me down, smear my name, say I did it for the fame, what I did
was kill the man who killed my country.

Epic avatar by Griffinheart.
http://md427.deviantart.com/

6--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:01 am

5P33D5

avatar
Frontier Brain
Frontier Brain
i shall enter Very Happy


_________________



Click on Giratina to see my profile!

7--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Mon Sep 06, 2010 5:12 am

Pokéfreak

avatar
Pokémon Hero
Pokémon Hero
Eh, I'm gonna enter, but don't expect it to be good.


_________________
It's really annoying being the only real gamer in my entire grade.

Playing: Fallout: New Vegas, Dead Space, Mass Effect
Watching: Beauty and the Beast, Glee, Arrested Development, Whatever anime I can find
Reading: Max Broox's works, The Necromancer
Listening to: Blue October, Wilco, Elbow, Tripod

You can also check out what I'm doing at my twitter, here

8--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:52 am

griffinheart

avatar
Admin
Admin
Guys, it doesn't matter how good it is! What matters is how much fun you have ^-^


_________________



Forum Rules ¤ DL Store ¤ DL Group
Pwn Shop ¤ Spriter Society ¤ deviantART

~^~^^~^~
♥ ♥ ♥
http://guardeddreams.site40.net

9--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:40 pm

Clover

avatar
Admin
Admin
Dark Sceptile wrote:I might enter with a crappy one. >_>

exactly what I mean by ridiculous =w= it's going to be random pasta.

http://www.sweetcharm.net

10--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:41 pm

[Meap]Katniss~<3

avatar
Pokémon Legend
Pokémon Legend
Mine's gonna be about Clover gettin all hyper on cake and she destroys the forum and stuff. Yeaah Cool Beans

Also, we gonz has art contest soon?


_________________


http://reione.forumotion.com/

11--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:42 pm

Esp

avatar
Forum Mod
Forum Mod
I might try to enter with a b-day based...umm...Metroid one? XD

12--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:21 pm

ThisGuy

avatar
Pokémon Champion
Pokémon Champion
My entry in this contest. o3o
Spoiler:
The Entry Without a Title


"Hgh...so...BORED!" A girl plopped her head down on the table she was sitting next to. "....ARRGH!" she suddenly stood up and yelled at the ceiling. "This is suppoesed to be a party, isn't it?! Where the heck is the excitement?!" Just after saying this though, she heard a...rather bizzarre sound.

"aaaaahhhhh...."

Putting her head back up, she looked around the room. "...? What...in the world is that?"

Pausing for a second, the girl looked around for a bit before hearing the sound again, this time louder than before. "Aaaaaaaahhhhhh....."

Yep, that's a weird sound all right. After realizing that it was coming from outside, the girl went on out to her front porch to have a look-see. She immediately regretted it.

"AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!! -OWNED!!!! CRASH!!

Busting a hole in the rooftop, the foreign object had landed on the girl's front porch. Unfortunately, it landed on her, too.

Immediately after gaining conciousness again, the girl scrambled to get out from under the object.

"RRrrrggh! Oof! WHAT THE HECK WAS-Oh, it's you Blaze."

The foreign object was Blaze, huh?

"Heh, you don't sound happy to see me, Showers." Blaze smiled as he straightened himself up. (And the girl was Showers! Good, now I can stop referring to her as "the girl".)

"Dang it Blaze! Who the freak WOULD be happy to have someone land on top of them?! Why didn't you just use the door, anyway?"

"Ah, come on. That's no fun! Skydiving's really the way to go to make an entrance. Wink Besides, I brought the DL Preseeeent~!" He hummed.

"YOU REALLY BROUGHT IT?!" Showers squealed as she jumped over to him. (Which is odd because after that, normal people would at LEAST have broken legs.) "Where is it?!"

Blaze took a look at his watch. A special watch that had a marowak ( Awesomesauce! ) keeping time on it. "It should be here any second now."

She gave him an inquisitive look. "...? What does that-"

CRASH!!

A large present dropped from the sky and landed on our female lead.

"DANG IT BLAZE!"

10 Minutes Later


Showers and Blaze had gone inside and were heading down the hallway and into the backyard.

"Sho howth the parthy peparathon goin'?" Blaze asked through a swollen face. (Shower's didn't appreaciate being used as a landing strip.)

She grabbed a bag of ice for Blaze and tossed it to him. "Well, Sharlott is decorating the backyard as we speak, and Clover's setting up the food and drinks. Did you send the invites to Kommeo and Griffin?"

"I sure did!" He gave her a thumbs up. "Although, Komms said that he couldn't get a ride over here, so I...er..."helped" him find one."

"What do you mean by-"

AAAAAAHHHHHH!!

"....Dang it Blaze.... Crying or Very sad "

CRASH!!


30 minutes later

After peeling Kommeo off of Showers, the other guests had arrived. Fuzia, Rezna, DX, AV, ESP, LOL, BRB, BBQ....everyone was there! Not to mention that the backyard was strewn with birthday themed papercrafts made by Sharlott, and an army of trolls lying in a pile by the front gate. (They tried to crash the party. Ban hammering ensued.)

"OK Everyone!" Showers clapped her hands together to get everyone's attention. "It's time to unveil the DL Present!"

She motioned over to the back door, 5P33D5 and Darknesswolf wheeled out the present into the center of the DL Members.

"Now, time for the unveiling!" She said as she yanked away the paper in one fell swoop. A silence washed over the crowd for a second.

....

"Fu fu fu... Oh, it's wonderful!" Miku laughed evily as she pulled out her personal ban-hammer.

"Yes, it's PERFECT." DX said as he did the same.

"BA HA HA HA HA HA!" Clover laughed as she followed what everyone else was doing. For, on the stand, was none other than Pokecenter tied to a stake, dressed as a Pikachu, with a sign that said "Beat me, I have candy inside!" (He's not dead, I'm not that cruel.)

"All right guys!" Shower's eyes glinted. "LET'S GET STARTED!"

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY DREAM LEAGUE!" Everyone shouted as they jumped in.

The candy was good.

DANG IT BLAZE! D<




Woo! End! I just couldn't resist using Pokecenter as the final joke, as he kinda killed himself off and we haven't heard of him for a while. Anyway, I haven't written anything in a long time, so I hope you enjoyed it! Smile



Last edited by ThisGuy on Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:33 am; edited 1 time in total


_________________

13--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:36 pm

Pokéfreak

avatar
Pokémon Hero
Pokémon Hero
....................... -dies-

WHY MUST YOU INTIMIDATE ME WITH FUNNINESS AND LENGTH?!


_________________
It's really annoying being the only real gamer in my entire grade.

Playing: Fallout: New Vegas, Dead Space, Mass Effect
Watching: Beauty and the Beast, Glee, Arrested Development, Whatever anime I can find
Reading: Max Broox's works, The Necromancer
Listening to: Blue October, Wilco, Elbow, Tripod

You can also check out what I'm doing at my twitter, here

14--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:45 pm

griffinheart

avatar
Admin
Admin
XDXDXD niiiiice!!!! <3


_________________



Forum Rules ¤ DL Store ¤ DL Group
Pwn Shop ¤ Spriter Society ¤ deviantART

~^~^^~^~
♥ ♥ ♥
http://guardeddreams.site40.net

15--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 4:00 am

5P33D5

avatar
Frontier Brain
Frontier Brain
Yay I was in it xD

Guy you have a really good sense of humour Very Happy


_________________



Click on Giratina to see my profile!

16--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 4:54 pm

Clover

avatar
Admin
Admin
oh my lord...I LOL'D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Guy you are epic ♫

http://www.sweetcharm.net

17--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:32 pm

ThisGuy

avatar
Pokémon Champion
Pokémon Champion
*aside* I wonder if anyone'll notice the hidden easter egg I put in there. >.> <.<


_________________

18--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:34 pm

Clover

avatar
Admin
Admin
@ThisGuy wrote:*aside* I wonder if anyone'll notice the hidden easter egg I put in there. >.> <.<

It kind of depends on how you're defining an easter egg................................

http://www.sweetcharm.net

19--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:36 pm

ThisGuy

avatar
Pokémon Champion
Pokémon Champion
@Clover wrote:
@ThisGuy wrote:*aside* I wonder if anyone'll notice the hidden easter egg I put in there. >.> <.<

It kind of depends on how you're defining an easter egg................................

Hidden message type easter egg.


_________________

20--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:23 pm

Esp

avatar
Forum Mod
Forum Mod
Sorry ahead of time Clover

Spoiler:

As the girl walked down the street, she noticed the flyer laying on the ground. She read it:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DREAM LEAGUE
WE ARE PLANNING A SURPRISE PARTY FOR CLOVER
DON'T TELL HER

As the girl read, she started running to the address printed in the bottom. When she got to the house at that address, she knew she was in the right place. The house was shaped like a Cubone head, so she suspected it was Guy's house. She knocked on the door and waited a couple seconds before anyone answered.

"Hey Showers, we were wondering if you were coming. DX said he called and left a message for you"

"Really? I didn't see it on my phone."

"Oh...well at least you're here."

"Yeah..."

Showers and Guy walked into the house. Then they both heard a screeching noise.

"Oh, sounds like Cladstn and Kommeo are here. I told them to slow down before they turned into my driveway. >_>"

As Guy walked off to the front door, Showers decided to look around. She had never been in Guy's house. When she got to the backyard, she saw something horrible, DXRenegade on a stripper pole... She ran off to the bathroom to throw up.


"Well, I told you to slow down first..."

Guy had walked back into the house with Kommeo and Cladstn.

"We know. Cladstn forgot, though..."

"If you knew, then how did you forget?"

"I don't know"

Kommeo and Guy continued arguing as Cladstn went to the bathroom that Showers had just come out of.

"I wouldn't go in there if I were you, Clad."

"Alright then."

Showers walked off. Cladstn headed toward the backyard, saw DX on a stripper pole, and headed toward the kitchen instead. There he saw a note saying:

'Don't make Cladstn get on the stripper pole. DX volunteered for it.'

Cladstn walked off to the backyard and saw DX was done practicing. He hoped Clover would like it...


"SURPRISE"

Clover almost fell backwards from all the people there.

"Wow, is that DX on a stripper pole?!"

She goes running to the backyard, leaving everyone stunned.

21--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:28 pm

Clover

avatar
Admin
Admin
LOL what on earth Embarassed bAnyway here is my entry:

Spoiler:

NOTES BEFORE READING: Everyone is half Pokémon half human here. This is basically what I was going to make the first comic about, but I don't have a lot of time to draw it Sad Maybe I will someday.

GIRLS
Clover - Flareon
Griffinheart - Absol
Darknesswolf - Eevee
Old Lady - ???

GUYS
DXRenagade - Lucario
ThisGuy - Marowak
Dark Sceptile - Porygon Z
Meap - Mudkip

[scene]
And old Japanese style Onsen (hot spring) run by a little old Lady. The group is walking in to enjoy the DL Anniversary and their day off. Clover is talking to the old lady who works at the Onsen.

Clover: So the group discount is still going on right?


Old Lady: Oh yes! It's a really great deal.

Clover: Alright. I'll take a Saké then =w=;

DX: No vodka?...Eh...Saké it is.

Griffinheart: Any opportunity to drink huh you guys?


ThisGuy: Can I just get an order of bread? o3o;

[scene]
After buying snacks, the group heads out to the springs. The Onsen is divided up into 2 sections (guys and girls) The hotsprings are surounded by lush trees and bushes that make a lovely natural barrier. There are also large boulders and flat stones to sit on.

Griffinheart: Aah...it's so pretty here! I wish I could live here.

--a loud splash is heard from the guy's section--

Griffinheart: Pff. Men. No respect for nature.

--Clover runs by griffinheart and does a cannon ball into the spring, closely followed by Darknesswolf--

Griffinheart: affraid

[scene]
Onto the guys section....

--DX is staring at ThisGuy--

ThisGuy:......yes?

DX: Oh. Um, well...do you ever take off your helmet?

--DX was referring to the marowak helmet that ThisGuy was always wearing--

ThisGuy: pig Only for your mother...

DX: HEY! Mad

Meap: GUYS, come on! We're here to celebrate the anniversary. Lets just relax.

Dark Sceptile: And on such a momentous occasion...perhaps DX will let me try some of his Saké Very Happy

DX: >_> Nu....

Dark Sceptile: Sad aw.

--suddenly a loud crashing noise and yelling was heard from the girls side of the springs--

Meap: Hm, should one of us go over to check on them?

ThisGuy: And risk getting labeled a total perv? No thanks.

DX: I don't mind! Cool

--DX walks into the entry room where the old lady is sitting--

DX: Um hey, I need to check on my friends. It sounds like they might be in trouble or something?

Old Lady: Ohohohoho I see what you did thar cat I won't tell anyone! hohohoho~

DX: Um...right then. Gunna check on my friends now.


--He walks out to the girls side of the Onsen to see Darknesswolf, Griffinheart, and Clover all battling a giant Tentacruel that seems to have come from the spring.--

DX: OMG WHAT!?

Clover: DX!!!!!

--Clover was wrapped up completely by one of the tentacles, and was being swung around in the air--

Clover: STAB ITS EYE WITH SOMETHING!!!! I THINK IT'S THE WEAK SPOT!!

--Darknesswolf and Griffinheart were nimbly dodging the tentacles. It seemed their attacks had little to no effect on the massive Tentacruel--

DX: Okay! Hold on! confused

--His mind was racing to think of an object he could throw at the sea creatures eye. He ran back into the room with the Old Lady and picked her up--

DX: HYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

--the old lady flew through the air towards the tentacruel's eye. Unfortunately, the massive tentacruel saw this, and slapped her to the boys side of the Onsen where she landed right in the middle of ThisGuy, DarkSceptile, and Meap--

ThisGuy: Suspect Old lady!? What are you doing here?

Old Lady: Massive....tentacruel......oh em gee.........

Dark Sceptile: Come on! We've got to go help them!

--The boys ran over and started attacking the tentacruel with the girls. ThisGuy threw his mighty bone club, Meap was biting the heck out of the tentacles, and DarkSceptile was slappin' it all around like none other, Griffinheart was throwing sky scrapers at it, Darknesswolf was trying to use tail whip but was not doing so hot!! Suddenly, A GIANT ARCEUS APPEARED!!!!!--

::arceus:: Arceus: ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRR~!!!!!!!!!!

--Arceus then epically pwnd the gigantic Tentacruel right in it's face, sending it back into the depths of the spring. Suddenly, it transformed back into the Old Lady!--

Old Lady: FEH! That's what you get for slapping around a little old lady~ hohohohohohoho~♫

Clover: Old Lady! You were Arceus all along? WOW! I don't know what to say except.....do you think we could have our money back? .-.

--end--



Last edited by Clover on Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:25 pm; edited 1 time in total

http://www.sweetcharm.net

22--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:47 pm

ThisGuy

avatar
Pokémon Champion
Pokémon Champion
Geez clover, didn't know you were into that sorta thing!

COOL, CUBONE HOUSE! .o.


_________________

23--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:33 pm

griffinheart

avatar
Admin
Admin
*dies* oh wow guys XDXDXD


_________________



Forum Rules ¤ DL Store ¤ DL Group
Pwn Shop ¤ Spriter Society ¤ deviantART

~^~^^~^~
♥ ♥ ♥
http://guardeddreams.site40.net

24--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:41 pm

Esp

avatar
Forum Mod
Forum Mod
@Clover wrote:LOL what on earth Embarassed bAnyway here is my entry:

Spoiler:

NOTES BEFORE READING: Everyone is half Pokémon half human here. This is basically what I was going to make the first comic about, but I don't have a lot of time to draw it Sad Maybe I will someday.

GIRLS
Clover - Flareon
Griffinheart - Absol
Darknesswolf - Eevee
Old Lady - ???

GUYS
DXRenagade - Lucario
ThisGuy - Marowak
Dark Sceptile - Porygon Z
Meap - Mudkip

[scene]
And old Japanese style Onsen (hot spring) run by a little old Lady. The group is walking in to enjoy the DL Anniversary and their day off. Clover is talking to the old lady who works at the Onsen.

Clover: So the group discount is still going on right?


Old Lady: Oh yes! It's a really great deal.

Clover: Alright. I'll take a Saké then =w=;

DX: No vodka?...Eh...Saké it is.

Griffinheart: Any opportunity to drink huh you guys?


ThisGuy: Can I just get an order of bread? o3o;

[scene]
After buying snacks, the group heads out to the springs. The Onsen is divided up into 2 sections (guys and girls) The hotsprings are surounded by lush trees and bushes that make a lovely natural barrier. There are also large boulders and flat stones to sit on.

Griffinheart: Aah...it's so pretty here! I wish I could live here.

--a loud splash is heard from the guy's section--

Griffinheart: Pff. Men. No respect for nature.

--Clover runs by griffinheart and does a cannon ball into the spring, closely followed by Darknesswolf--

Griffinheart: affraid

[scene]
Onto the guys section....

--DX is staring at ThisGuy--

ThisGuy:......yes?

DX: Oh. Um, well...do you ever take off your helmet?

--DX was referring to the marowak helmet that ThisGuy was always wearing--

ThisGuy: pig Only for your mother...

DX: HEY! Mad

Meap: GUYS, come on! We're here to celebrate the anniversary. Lets just relax.

Dark Sceptile: And on such a momentous occasion...perhaps DX will let me try some of his Saké Very Happy

DX: >_> Nu....

Dark Sceptile: Sad aw.

--suddenly a loud crashing noise and yelling was heard from the girls side of the springs--

Meap: Hm, should one of us go over to check on them?

ThisGuy: And risk getting labeled a total perv? No thanks.

DX: I don't mind! Cool

--DX walks into the entry room where the old lady is sitting--

DX: Um hey, I need to check on my friends. It sounds like they might be in trouble or something?

Old Lady: Ohohohoho I see what you did thar cat I won't tell anyone! hohohoho~

DX: Um...right then. Gunna check on my friends now.


--He walks out to the girls side of the Onsen to see Darknesswolf, Griffinheart, and Clover all battling a giant Tentacruel that seems to have come from the spring.--

DX: OMG WHAT!?

Clover: DX!!!!!

--Clover was wrapped up completely by one of the tentacles, and was being swung around in the air--

Clover: STAB ITS EYE WITH SOMETHING!!!! I THINK IT'S THE WEAK SPOT!!

--Darknesswolf and Griffinheart were nimbly dodging the tentacles. It seemed their attacks had little to no effect on the massive Tentacruel--

DX: Okay! Hold on! confused

--His mind was racing to think of an object he could throw at the sea creatures eye. He ran back into the room with the Old Lady and picked her up--

DX: HYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

--the old lady flew through the air towards the tentacruel's eye. Unfortunately, the massive tentacruel saw this, and slapped her to the boys side of the Onsen where she landed right in the middle of ThisGuy, DarkSceptile, and Meap--

ThisGuy: Suspect Old lady!? What are you doing here?

Old Lady: Massive....tentacruel......oh em gee.........

Dark Sceptile: Come on! We've got to go help them!

--The boys ran over and started attacking the tentacruel with the girls. ThisGuy threw his mighty bone club, Meap was biting the heck out of the tentacles, and DarkSceptile was slappin' it all around like none other, Griffinheart was throwing sky scrapers at it, Darknesswolf was trying to use tail whip but was not doing so hot!! Suddenly, A GIANT ARCEUS APPEARED!!!!!--

::arceus:: Arceus: ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRR~!!!!!!!!!!

--Arceus then epically pwnd the gigantic Tentacruel right in it's face, sending it back into the depths of the spring. Suddenly, it transformed back into the Old Lady!--

Old Lady: FEH! That's what you get for slapping around a little old lady~ hohohohohohoho~♫

Clover: Old Lady! You were Arceus all along? WOW! I don't know what to say except.....do you think we could have our money back? .-.

--end--

DX, you better give me some Saké. Grr...

25--- Re: Fiction Contest #4- THE RESULTS ARE IN! on Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:45 pm

ThisGuy

avatar
Pokémon Champion
Pokémon Champion
OH HEY! You remembered the bread thing! I'm so touched Sunkern


_________________

View previous topic View next topic Back to top  Message [Page 1 of 3]

Go to page : 1, 2, 3  Next

Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum