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Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!!

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26--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 09, 2010 1:38 pm

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@Darknesswolf wrote:No don't worry I'm her minion I'll run the contest while she's gone

Yay! Go Darkness! :3


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27--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 09, 2010 2:59 pm

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Here's my entry:


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The Black Flames
A Short Story for the Dream League Fiction Contest #2



I clutched my sister’s hand and didn’t let go. The world vanished slowly around us. Darkness enveloped us. Carter gripped her hands around my back, not letting go. She dug her face into my chest, not looking around us. I felt tears stream down her face. My eyes, however, were wide open. Swirling around us were strange characters that I couldn’t make out. Suddenly, Carter’s grip tightened. She screamed and soon I felt her body move away from mine, her hands gripping my arms. I snapped back to reality and noticed something pulling Carter by her legs. Black shadows crept up her legs and enveloped them. I could barely see the figure pulling her, but it wasn’t shaped right. It seemed to have an organic shape. Suddenly, she slammed forward, as if the figure had let her go and she smacked her head into my stomach, causing me to fall flat.

I stood up slowly and Carter stood up.. Her hands were black and she had black flame patterns going up her arms. She didn’t seem to notice them, but I sure did. There were tears welling in her blue eyes, but then she stopped suddenly. Around us, the world had reappeared. A figure emerged from the house behind us. It was our mother. She ran to us, but then I noticed that she had the same marking as Carter did. Our father emerged, and he too had the markings. They smiled, but it was a strange, robotic smile. It gave me the chills, and I knew something was wrong. They moved closer to me and I backed up. Carter’s face now held the same, creeping smile as the others. People emerged from the houses around me, and I knew something was wrong.

I ran for it, toward the city line. The people were quick, but were somewhat oblivious to the world around them. I made my way into the city quickly, but it was empty. I ran, making many twists and turns, making sure not to turn into a dead end. I heard cackling from every direction. I soon found myself entrapped in a four-way dead end street. I didn’t put myself there, as the world around me had been completely open, except the buildings. I saw a figure emerge from the corner. It was the same figure who had pulled Carter’s legs.

“You did this!” I shouted.

“No, I did not young Mason, you have done this to yourself. I tried to rescue you, but you and your sister resisted. She has been saved, but you yourself have not been spared of this realm. I have only a few minutes till you will be returned to where you were before I summoned you. Only one is good in this world. Another is horrible,” the figure said.

“What is this place then, tell me?” I demanded.

“This is a parallel universe in which one man has created carbon copies of the humans in your world. The only flaw is their black flames upon their arms. The creator, Michael Rengold, has created that design to be a trademark, so everyone knows who made it, but sadly, those give away the facts that they are carbon copies. The only good in this world can be found at the top of the tower. He holds the key to returning you to realm. But, one touch from a copy will turn you to one of them.” the figure said.

“Carter is truly okay? She has not been changed has she?” I asked.

“No, your sister is okay. The fact that she slammed into your stomach was just an illusion. I had pulled her from the void. Now hurry! Go to the tower, and do not let yourself be touched!” the figure said, then he vanished.

I blinked and I was back where I had been. I turned and noticed the copies coming toward me, arms outstretched. I turned back around and ran. I noticed the tower looming over the street in front of me. I pulled open the door and ran inside. I ran and pressed the elevator button, but it wouldn’t open. The copies pushed the door open and I ran for the stairs. I bolted up the stairs. I had made it up ten flights when I looked down and saw the copies on the third level. Apparently copies don’t handle stairs well. I finally made it to the top, with no breath to spare. I pulled the door open and noticed a man sitting at a desk . He wore a lab coat the covered his arms and sagged down to below his knees. He wore black trousers and experimental gloves. He noticed my hands and handed me a small key. I took it, being careful not to touch his hands, just in case.

He told me to jump from the window and push the key into the air and turn it. The copies slammed on the door and it burst open. Suddenly, they swamped forward and overtook the professor, turning him into a copy. He soon held the zombified look on his face. I became frantic, so I grabbed a fire extinguisher and slammed it on the window. The window shattered and I covered my eyes, to avoid getting glass in them. I climbed on the counter and jumped out the window.

Wind blasted my face and I managed to push the key into the air, while falling. I turned it quickly and suddenly, the world vanished around me. I was back in the void. A pair of hands grabbed my legs and I let it pull me free. I noticed the figure and Carter, the real Carter, pulling me free. I fell to the ground and threw the key back into the void, causing it to close. I sighed and sat down on the floor and my eyes closed, falling asleep.

Two figures loomed over Mason. One was the one who had rescued him. “He is ready now.”

Word Count- 100


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28--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 09, 2010 3:17 pm

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i was just talking about my ENTRY. i was planning on ENTERING but i'm too busy to write


thanks meap~


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29--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 09, 2010 3:53 pm

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You're welcome! And that's too bad Griff... I wish you could enter!


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30--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 09, 2010 4:25 pm

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i could try, but i probably wouldnt be able to finish it


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31--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 09, 2010 11:50 pm

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@griffinheart wrote:i could try, but i probably wouldnt be able to finish it

aww ;^; try harderrrrr!!!!

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32--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Mon May 10, 2010 5:56 pm

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okay... .^. *checks calender* quotes due tomorrow, book review monday, vocab tuesday, closing idk when, and work on bleach comic people... i guess i might have to do it when i can find time...


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33--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Tue May 18, 2010 3:24 am

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This sucks.... Anyway... Do Not expect an entry from me i seriously have no free time Sad i might enter... but don't count on it


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34--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Tue May 18, 2010 5:39 pm

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aw... T-T

oh yeah, i have to type up my entry...


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35--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Tue May 18, 2010 6:19 pm

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remember guys, you don't have to take the writing process TOO strictly ^_^;
Just have fun with it and tell a story!


I'm looking forward to reading some, which is why I mention that =w=

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36--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Tue May 18, 2010 6:30 pm

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lol, i wouldnt say that having people read it over to make sure it was good as too strict...


XD one of my characters is like totally bipolar lol


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37--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Tue May 18, 2010 6:45 pm

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bipolar is always fun :3

(except for the person experiencing it but yeeeeah....)

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38--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Fri May 21, 2010 8:00 pm

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EXTENDING TO THE 29TH


some people need more time to finish their entries so i have extended the time~


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39--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun May 30, 2010 12:40 pm

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VOTING HAS STARTED
Okay, so this is how the voting will work: everybody who has not submitted an entry ranks their choices from 1st to 3rd. The people who did enter can vote for their picks for first and 2nd, but they can't vote for their own. Simple enough? THE GO! VOTE VOTE VOTE!


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1- jojo
2- meap


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40--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Mon May 31, 2010 12:03 pm

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1st ~ Katya
2nd ~ Meap

Thank you for your vote Griffin! I lurve yhoo! *Glomp*


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41--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 6:39 am

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1Meap the alien
2Griffinheart


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42--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:03 am

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I vote

1. Jojo
2. Katya


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43--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 10:17 am

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Okay this is a really hard one.

@Griffinheart: I like the concept for your story...people with pokemon powers. Sort of like x-men :3 young kids playing around with there power, using it for good or evil.

@Jojo: I really like the imagery and word choice!

@Meap: Lots of mystery about your story o3o! Keep it up


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2nd - Griffinheart

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44--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 10:46 am

[Meap]Katniss~<3

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Clover and Darknesswolf! It says if you didn't submit an entry, you order them from one to three, but if you did, then you order it from one to two.


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45--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 11:56 am

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Ok well there were only 3 people who entered the contest XD I'm hoping griffinheart will be able to guess who the 3rd one is.

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46--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:02 pm

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Lol XP


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47--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:48 pm

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XDXDXD yea, i can guess XD


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48--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:37 pm

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So when does the voting finish? There is no date I believe.. Also - I wish you all luck! It's a close one.. x.x


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49--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Sun Jun 06, 2010 8:02 pm

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not many people voted.... D: might be too soon to close off voting...


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50--- Re: Fiction Contest #2- RESULTS ARE IN!!!! on Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:42 am

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Maybe another few weeks? ~


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